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LewisF

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  1. 6 hours ago, perthblue02 said:

    The first part has got an early Buzzcocks feel to it, which is never a bad thing , really liked the first 2.40 or so minutes, a bit of constructive criticism hope you don't mind

    Intro too long,  drums etc should kick in at around 14 seconds , and song would be more powerful/ effective if it ended at 2.40, Personally think everything after that does not add anything to the song, sometimes short and sweet is the way to go. If you really like the stuff after 2.40 maybe move a shortened version into the middle somewhere

     

    Look forward to hearing more

    Edit: (just bookmarked your youtube channel for further listening)

    Thanks a lot for the response! Looking back, maybe a shorter intro should have been used with, as you say, the drums kicking in earlier (and without the 2nd time repetition of the riff).

    On the other suggestion, tthe part from 2:41 - 3:03 we just felt added some extra heaviness to the song. Although to be fair, the ascending/descending octave part from 3:03 - 3:25 is pretty lacking in ingenuity (but we all just loved playing that bit).

    Many thanks, will keep you updated :)

  2. 47 minutes ago, blueboy3333 said:

    @LewisF Good effort that mate, I was tapping my foot by the end and my foot rarely taps! I detected a slight hint of the Libertines in the midst of it all.

    Not sure how far down memory lane your going to get at 15 though, could be a short walk:)

     

    Many thanks indeed! And Libertines are a big influence to us (got tickets to see them in Blackpool too :) )

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