i (You started the sentence with this letter so you missed the importance of capitalisation here.)
games (As far as I’m aware there were not two games taking place simultaneously, therefore you should have used the singular 'game'.)
to day (This suggests that you are addressing the day.)
ince and williams. (These are names, we call these Proper Nouns and therefore should have the first letter capitalised.)
cryse. (Cryse, there is no word in the Dictionary for this, however I believe you were intending to spell 'cries.')
there, ther, opinons (their, their & opinions).
Who is educating children these days!? My word!
QUOTE (Ste B @ Aug 10 2008, 14:48 ) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I doubt that given your efforts that the club would be calling you.
The songs on this thread are embarrassing at best. I'm sure we'd hear a lot of "what the F***** hell was that" sung back.
Also, genius. I needed a laugh and you provided it. Also SteB. Great name.